wrist watch slowly ticks
24 shovels tunnel
and find tomorrow
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The classic structure of a haiku is 5 syllables followed by 7 and then 5 again. More importantly the concepts conveyed should stand alone and form a whole. I enjoy opportunities to stretch the definition at the risk of falling outside the boundaries.
Wednesday, December 30, 2009
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